This is my speech for this year that I wrote. I wrote about the future technology and gave the pros and cons about it because I thought that the people needed to know about that and what was and will happen to the future if things keep on going on like this. What I think I did very well I think was giving the good consequences but giving a stronger opinion on the negative side.
Tuesday, August 13, 2019
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Hi there, my name is Liam and I am a student in Lh3 at Gis Int School. I really like the colours that you used for the background of the speech cards It made the whole thing stand out. Your speech made me think of when I delivered and presented my speech. Have you thought about making the whole thing slightly bigger so that blind people like me can clearly see the words. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintliamw.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Liam, thank you for your comment. I coloured my cards that colour because it might have been harder for me to read if it was different. On the blog it is shown quite small, I could try and make it a bit bigger. Thank you again for your time and feedback.
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Hi Malsha,I like how you thought about you ideas, maybe next time you could take away the boxes around the writing. But you did a very good Speech.
ReplyDeleteHi Noah, Thank you for that nice comment.
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Malo E Lelei Malsha, My name is Ruby from Saint Patricks School. I like the colour contrast you have used. If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://spslupep.blogspot.com/ . I hope to blog with you soon.
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